To my laptop, Hello, I am your owner Nick. I miss you so much. I almost used you everyday in my life. I feel lost with you gone suddenly. I am really in need of you now. I need a computer to do my homework but, it is hard to use the computer here. I need to have a reservation for the computer use. I am writing a poem to you because I really miss you.
I know you're just a keyboard and a monitor and a complex machine. But You are a wonderful thing. and you bring a lot of pleasure to me. you bring me smiles and fun when
Thank you for the information you give
for the fun you give
for the communication you give
for the convenience you give me
for the games you give me
Lastly, for the news you give me
You give a lot of things to me. And, I am very thankful for that. Once again, I miss you so much.I hope I can see you soon when I come back home.
HI, I'm your Writing TA Won-Woo. Upon reading your ode, I see that your laptop means a lot to you. You gave several examples that prove this and that's good. However, there is one problem about formatting since the beginning is an essay and the end is a poem. Try merging them to either one. Otherwise, not bad! :D
ReplyDeleteHi,I'm your classmate William Ju. I think you had many thanks to Laptop.
ReplyDeleteI think that you really thanked to your laptop
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