Monday, July 30, 2012

an ode to my laptop

To my laptop, Hello, I am your owner Nick. I miss you so much. I almost used you everyday in my life. I feel lost with you gone suddenly. I am really in need of you now. I need a computer to do my homework but, it is hard to use the computer here. I need to have a reservation for the computer use. I am writing a poem to you because I really miss you. 


I know you're just a keyboard and a monitor and a complex machine. But You are a wonderful thing. and you bring a lot of pleasure to me. you bring me smiles and fun when 
my friends come on the screen.                                             you bring my friends far away in other countries. Now I can visit them everyday, if I want toyou make many people occupied. I can give up things for you laptop.                                                                                      I am very thankful for the things you give me
            Thank you for the information you give                                                                                                                  
            for the fun you give 
            for the communication you give
            for the convenience you give me 
            for the games you give me 
            Lastly, for the news you give me
 

You give a lot of things to me. And, I am very thankful  for that. Once again, I miss you so much.I hope I can see you soon when I come back home.

3 comments:

  1. HI, I'm your Writing TA Won-Woo. Upon reading your ode, I see that your laptop means a lot to you. You gave several examples that prove this and that's good. However, there is one problem about formatting since the beginning is an essay and the end is a poem. Try merging them to either one. Otherwise, not bad! :D

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  2. Hi,I'm your classmate William Ju. I think you had many thanks to Laptop.

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  3. I think that you really thanked to your laptop

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